Rewriting Netflix's Death Note Movie

Last time, we discussed why Netflix’s adaptation of Death Note was a disappointment, and could have been a lot better. In short, it doesn’t quite swing for the fences with the manga, instead throwing out a good majority of what made Death Note so appealing, in favour of a dreary romance drama. The characters are profoundly stupid, whiny, and spend more time flailing their hands than doing anything with the titular Death Note. Though it did have some shred of interesting ideas, the film didn’t commit to anything of merit. Now, in this follow up entry, I shall be pitching a few ideas on how Death Note may have been improved.

For one, I feel a property like this, which involves a long game of wits, moves, and countermoves, may have worked better as a miniseries or a full out TV show. While the film looked like it would tackle the duel of minds between Light and L, it quickly abandons it, replaced by a semi-interesting but ultimately flawed romance between two dumb teenagers.

It is possible I am looking at it a little too unfairly as a fan of the anime, as it does manage to pull off this cautionary tale of giving teenagers great power but abusing it with little thought of the consequences. But, when you adapt a movie after something of Death Note’s calibre, the expectations are high.

Light and L are both geniuses, often cool, calm, and collected in their moves against one another. Perhaps the screenwriters thought how the two characters were portrayed in the manga would not work well with the story they had in mind? While Light Yagami decides to use the Death Note on a whim, quickly developing his god complex, Light Turner has legit, personal reasons that tempt him to use the book’s powers. His mother was murdered, the culprit getting off free. He then defends Mia from a bully, but is reprimanded by the school principal for doing homework for others, when Light is the victim here. Ryuk gives him the opportunity to get justice, becoming Kira.

Kira’s reputation in both versions of the story differ depending on the setting. In Japan, Kira is viewed as a criminal by authorities, based upon the country’s severe condemnation on criminals. In the Netflix film, set in Seattle, both civilians and cops praise Kira’s judgement. This could symbolise America’s need to police the world. In a montage, criminals implied to be from North Korea and ISIS are seen being punished by Kira.

One of the biggest problems with the film is that these characters are named Light and L, two of the most compelling characters in manga. To completely alter them to their core, to the point they no longer resemble the iconic characters they are based on, is bound to put off any fan expecting a fair adaptation.

So, what if instead of being Light Yagami and L, that these characters instead had been original ones? Perhaps, otherwise, the reaction to these characters wouldn’t have been so vicious. If I had written this movie (or TV series had it gone that route), “Light Turner” and “L” would not be the same characters as seen in the manga. Instead, Death Note would have been set in the same universe as the manga/anime, but set years after Kira’s reign of “justice”. Kira is gone, crime is on the rise, and there is no sign of Kira’s second coming as some predict. The character who is Light Turner could be renamed, but with the same story arc, and wham-bam-shalam, you have a brand new character. Completely unrelated to Light Yagami, aside from deciding to become the next Kira out of necessity.

L could stay the same too, but instead be rewritten as a successor to the original L, but struggles to keep his emotions in check, and live up to the reputation of the world’s greatest detective. This would explain why this L makes erratic decisions, is emotionally compromised, and does stupid things that the original L would not do.

There, I just rewrote the whole movie in two changes. Not-Light is a victim of injustice, Ryuk tempts him to use the Death Note and become the next Kira. New-L has become, well, the new L, and decides to stop Kira. Not-Light dates Mia and they both double as Kira. New-L teams up with the Seattle police force to identify Kira, but panics, and is convinced Not-Light is Kira, which turns out to be true. New-L’s mentor Renamed Watari gets killed, Not-Light finds out Mia is also using the Death Note, they fall out, New-L chases Not-Light, big dramatic ferris wheel ending, Mia dies, Not-Light planned everything to work out that way in advance, but his dad finds out he is Kira. The film ends on that pesky cliffhanger with Not-L ready to use the Death Note to kill Not-Light.

As for all of the altered Death Note rules…perhaps the King of the Shinigami could’ve altered the rules of the books? I’m grasping at straws here.

Another change could be exploring the deeper philosophy and moral discussions of Death Note. How is the world reacting to Kira and his powers of death and justice? In the manga/anime, the USA of all people cave in to Kira’s power. How was Kira’s justice affecting normal citizens morally and religiously? Are his actions good or evil in their eyes? There’s that scene with the Kira-worshipping website where people list those they feel deserve to die. While Mia is gung ho to start jotting down names, Light suggests half of the people listed might be innocent. I wonder if Light Yagami would consider such an option.

This website scene opens up all sorts of questions about Light’s brand of justice. Light Yagami just wrote down names of criminals who were reported on the news. What if it turned out they were innocent/framed/set up/a fall guy, etc.? Would Light write down a person’s name if they killed in self-defence? By accident? What if say a criminal is repentant, or making amends for a past crime? Who would Kira target? Would he take out ordinary criminals or people from across the board like businessmen, religious figures, or, what if his own relatives committed crimes? Who punishes Kira?

There’s another can of worms. What happened if Light (or Not-Light) was arrested? How would he survive in a trial or in jail? Would he be the number one whipping boy, or treated as some sort of saviour behind bars? See, the possibilities are virtually endless in Death Note.

The Death Note itself has a lot of rules, some of which are a little ridiculous or complicated. Many of these rules exist so the lore remains accurate, rigid, and firm. Whoever has their name written in the book will die. There is not “get out of death free burnable page” in the Japanese version, so either that convenient plot twist would either stay or go. Perhaps the most interesting rule is that up to six Death Notes can exist on Earth at the same time. Imagine the mayhem that would unfold. What type of movie would that be like?

Turns out Japan already did that movie. In one of the live action Japanese Death Note movies, Light Up the World, six Death Notes are dropped on Earth by the Shinigami out of amusement. This allows six different people to use the books very differently. You have the wannabe successor to Kira, a serial killer, a Russian doctor who kills terminally ill patients, a Japanese politician who murders Kira fans, a New York banker who axes his rivals, and the next L, who refuses to use his copy of the Death Note. Such a concept would be a real thrill to imagine as a TV series, Hey, there’s a great idea for a sequel to the Netflix movie!

These aren’t exactly concrete ideas, but there are those and many more to spread around. While the Netflix movie was met with mixed results, there is room for improvement, and if Death Note does get a sequel, which apparently there is.

Netflix's "Death Note" aka How Not To Adapt An Anime

Alita: Battle Angel has broken the curse that Hollywood can’t make good movies out of Japanese manga and anime, mostly thanks to James Cameron and Robert Rodriguez commitment to the film. While this could open the door for future visionaries to bring popular anime to the big screen, it doesn’t make up for the many disappointing movies that preceded it. We all know how much Dragonball Evolution sucked, how Ghost in the Shell duplicated the look of its source material but was disappointingly hollow, and well, then there is Netflix’s take on Death Note.

 

Death Note is based on the hugely popular manga by Tsugumi Ohba and Takeshi Obata, a thrilling, suspenseful detective horror story. The manga, subsequent anime, and other live action movies, worked well for their discussion on morality, the exciting cat-and-mouse game between the designated hero and villain, and the supernatural world building. Netflix’s film, directed by Adam Wingard, tried to adapt the story, world, and characters, but didn’t quite have the depth. Feeling like it was in a bit of a rush, Death Note eventually grinds to a discombobulated halt as it fumbles up the source material, chucking out the meat of the story, to rely on familiar tropes, an awkward romance, and characters making dumb decisions.

The manga/anime is about Light Yagami, a Japanese high school student who comes across the titular Death Note, a book which will kill whoever’s name is written within it. Light is approached by the book’s owner, Ryuk, a leering, grinning Shinigami (or death god), and pursues a goal to rid the world of criminals via the Death Note’s powers. Light soon develops a god complex, declaring himself the new embodiment of justice in the world, earning the messiah name of “Kira”. He finds opposition from “L”, a strange but genius detective, and a group of police led by Light’s own dad, who want to arrest the anonymous Kira. Light and L try to unearth each other’s identities in an incredible game of wits.

The Netflix adaptation takes that basic premise and runs with it. Light, now an American student from Seattle, and played by Nat Wolff, acquires the Death Note, and undergoes the same journey as his Japanese counterpart. Ryuk is voiced and partially mo-capped by Willem Dafoe, and is by far the most enjoyable part of the movie. Light adopts the mantle of Kira, becoming a champion of the people by killing outlaws. He teams up with the unstable cheerleader Mia Sutton (Margaret Qualley), to spread their own brand of justice, and form a destructive romantic relationship. Light’s dad James Turner (Shea Whigham) is recruited by this film’s version of L (Lakeith Stanfield) to help stop Kira.

Nat Wolff’s portrayal of Light is a very mixed bag. In the manga, Light Yagami is this near-sociopathic, manipulative genius who knows how to play a deadly game of chess, has a strong sense of self-justification, and shows little concern for others, even his own loved ones, especially if they stand between him and his self-granted godhood. Wolff’s Light is a weedy, wimpy, garden variety high school loner, but has a sense of conscience. Whilst Light Yagami would kill anyone who could expose his identity, regardless of right and wrong, Light Turner is driven a little more by morals. He only wishes to punish criminals, and protect the innocent. This comes from a minor sense of victimisation he has, receiving detention for doing homework for others, when he is being bullied into doing it to begin with. This sets up Light’s belief that the justice system is flawed through personal experience. This is further extended when it turns out his mother was murdered, and the killer got away.

Light lacks a sense of initiative and self-preservation, performing increasingly stupid decisions as the movie goes on, and even completely breaks down at the end of the film to have a shouting match with Mia. Because he shares his name with such an iconic character, Light has very little in common with Light Yagami, and is a poor attempt to adapt the anti-hero to the big screen. I don’t want to see Light Yagami freaking out at mistakes he made, or arguing with another character. He should be calmly and carefully plotting how their destruction.

While I enjoyed Lakeith Stanfield’s performance of L, the characterization is perhaps even worse than Light’s. He captured L’s eccentric personality well, but the character is defined as being a lot more emotionally vulnerable, panicky, and not very good at sleuthing. He accuses Light of being Kira with any physical evidence or legit suspicions, then goes completely ballistic, grabs a gun, and starts chasing Light through the streets, whilst performing parkour moves and sliding over cars. It feels completely out of place for such a character defined by his mind

  

Light and L feel like stand-ins for the actual characters, as neither have much in common with their anime counterparts. Perhaps if these two had been set up as original characters then adaptations of two established ones, the transition wouldn’t have been so difficult. I understand that they wanted to add a more vulnerable, morally grey element to both characters, which is fine, but they are so far flung from the source material, they might as well have been new characters altogether.

The cat-and-mouse duel of wits is barely acknowledged in the film, with L somehow figuring out, or rather guessing, that Light is Kira, with no evidence. Meanwhile, Light’s father puts two-and-two together with crucial evidence and motive, whilst the supposed genius detective L points fingers, and then gets all whiny when things go wrong. Instead, most of the film is dedicated to Light and Mia’s romance, and their increasingly desperate attempts to cover up their tracks. I suppose this is what is meant to set Death Note apart from the other adaptations, focusing on immature and frankly stupid teenagers wielding a power they abuse.

The character make increasingly stupid decisions, whittling down to a screaming match between Light and Mia atop a ferris wheel, whilst the scheming Ryuk is trying to demolish. Light is set up as a character who is willing to do whatever it takes to bring about justice, despite his initial hint of being a bit more of a moral person. But, by the end, he appears to have completely detached himself from his godhood, whimpering and pleading with Mia to throw away the Death Note so that they can be together. But, then, it turns out through rather forced means that the whole third act was set up by Light so he could kill Mia and get back the Death Note.

The lore of the Death Note itself gets ignored repeatedly in the movie. If a person’s name is written down in the book, they will die, and such a fate cannot be averted. But, the film changes that, including a rule that a person’s death can be stopped if the page with their name on it is burnt. Also, I am not sure if Light has a sadistic streak, but he decides to come up with rather nasty, Final Destination-style deaths for all of his victims, some of which feel impossible to pull off (going against Ryuk’s rule that deaths can only occur if physically possible).

Light’s girlfriend Mia is based on the character Misa Amane, a pop idol who owns a second Death Note in the manga. She has a darker side, but hides it behind a bubbly, airheaded persona that may or may not be real. To Light Yagami, Misa is just another pawn to use, and he has no genuine affection for her. Mia Turner has no real motivations. Why is she a cheerleader? She doesn’t exactly fit the bill for being one. She is grouchy, cynical, nihilistic, slightly gothic, and we are first introduced to her performing a human pyramid whilst smoking. She looks more like a girl you’d find smoking behind the school dumpsters, then being star of the cheerleading squad.

 

Her reasoning for joining Kira is, well, without reason. She is mildly angry at society for some reason with no further exploration, and that’s it. We know nothing about her as a person, or why she wants to use the Death Note apart from being a bit of a ruthless, slightly unhinged teenager with a bad attitude. The romance between Light and Mia dominates the movie, but beyond their “devil-may-care” attitude to what they are doing. In one scene, Light and Mia examine a website dedicated to Kira, where people list those they think should die. Whilst Mia is just eager to bring out the guillotine, Light is more logical, believing most of the listed criminals might just be people who his followers dislike or spite. Mia looks at him as if he just decided to spare Ted Bundy. What is  her motivation in life? Said scene is certainly a new take on Death Note, and might’ve helped it become a more interesting thought piece if it wasn’t such a mess.

If there was a shining light in this murky mess of a movie, it is Willem Dafoe as Ryuk. Though the grinning phantom mostly lingers in the shadows, Dafoe really brings the character to life, bringing back that devious, predator essence he had when he played the Green Goblin. While Ryuk is more of a watcher in the manga, entertained by Light and L’s game, he takes on a more active role in the Netflix movie.

  

Another problem with the film is changing the setting from Japan to America. Light and Mia go out of their way to utilise the Kira name without much food for thought, believing such a name would throw off the cops. Light claims “Kira” is both Russian and Celtic for “light”. I looked both translations up, they don’t. Plus, why would you use a word that supposedly translates in multiple languages to the same meaning? They dance around the fact whether or not Ryuk is a Shinigami or not, or some sort of demon who murders people for fun – only for Light to later be seen reading a book showing Ryuk depicted in his anime design in a piece of Japanese artwork.

Sadly, Death Note is a mismatched movie that doesn’t really know what it wants to be. Ironically, the titular Death Note, the primary game of wits, and the police investigation are forgotten about in the film, as it favours choppy romance and even cheesier action set pieces instead of exciting psychological thrills. They even had the nerve to end on a cliffhanger and setting up a potential sequel. Netflix could have easily adapted Death Note into a TV series or a miniseries, rather than a ninety-minute plot that has little in common with the popular manga. Perhaps, it could’ve been done a little differently.